After receiving feedback that the design is too top-heavy, which after reconsideration I agree with, I altered the lower half of the design so it contains more 'stories', and also added page numbers for each story, increased the font size slightly and added a small 'producers note' at the very foot of the page. Combined, this equals out the balance of the page, and makes it less top-heavy.
A superb draft of the contents page. It seems a little top heavy. Canyou revisit the work and develop it further.
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